Pitch Reflection teams presention

I think that my team and me could have done a lot better if we actually remember our lines without reading them from the board, which we ended up doing. We also needed to improvise a bit as one of our team members were not there on the day of our team presentation, which we had to our class mates our plan for making our advert. This made us lose confidence with going with our idea and showing our idea to others as we all agreed that we would all be there on the day of our teams presentation no matter what. 

What our team was majorly lacking in was the fact the we had almost no images when we were talking about pitching our idea and how we came up with what we were planning to do when making our advert.  We went to some sort of depth of detail in to our presentation but I would have to say it just didn't seem to be enough. In some of our slides we should have asked our selves why we went with this idea but instead of thinking longer about others idea which could have been better.

We just said sometime that we just decided on an idea without even explaining to our classmates why.  It was a bit unclear to people that were not part of our group making an advert so we needed to elaborate more. An example of this would be why we went with the slogan "Too good to be shared." We could have expanded more than we actually had in the presentation. We could have said how the slogan came from the story line of the advert, as we didn't really do that in our prsention.

I think though that we did explain our selves well enough in some slides of our presentation for example the story line and location of where the story and why we choice that place superficial. What we left out was that it was pretty simply for us to record an advert at school, as we wouldn't have to go out of our way to record our advert unless we were businesses. It also wouldn't take any money to really make our advert only by to pairs of chocolate which would equivalent of two pounds. 

When talking about time and channel if we were to put our advert on TV there was one problem that our team came across. Our team decided to put our Terry's chocolate advert in channels were Disney, channel 4, milk shake and Cabbies. The problem in this slide of the prevention was that we forgot to remove Cabbies from our slide as Cabbies do not have any adverts.  Other than that our explanation to why we chose some of the channels

What I was majorly lacking in was conference, I think that my team and me could have done a lot better if we actually remember our lines without reading them from the board, which we did. We

I think my team and me gave a pretty good explanation to why we chose kids as our main audience. As it was chocolate and most kids love chocolate at a young age we just decided that terry's chocolate orange would mostly appeal to kids at the age of 7 to 17 more than another other age range because of how energetic people at the age of 7 to 17 can be so energetic around age from 7 to 17.

As me and my team were reading from the board we were really focused on our audiences so it seem like we were not using direct address as we were mainly focusing on what to say next after our team member. So our pace of talking was consistent with each other’s. 

I think my team and I didn't explain ethos to a good standard a good enough standard. We didn't really talk about colour when we were supposed to and to explain some of the products morals, which we should have done which just didn’t feel like it wasn’t enough.

If I was to change anything it would be the fact that our presentation didn't have enough pictures and more words than it was needed. We also our overall feedback was positives but there were major things in the presentation that we could have improved on.